Ryanide's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Karnage Incident]

Ranked no #680WHAT??

THERE IS GREAT INJUSTICE IN NEWGROUNDS THAT THIS RANKS SO LOW!

*slams table with fist*

ANYONE WITH HALF A BRAIN AND A FUNCTIONAL EYEBALL CAN SEE THAT THIS IS QUALITY FLASH!

NCH responds:

lol oh comeon, I do have to admit its still not good enough.... maybe cause of the starting cause it was created 2 years ago and got abandon and then taken out recently and continued on...

[Halved]

interesting!

Great concept, and cool use of Flash 3D. I wish I had a 3D program for flash now...

I actually can't suggest ways to improve, seeing as I'm not experienced with 3D flash, but it felt incomplete somehow. Anyway, as I said before, a very cool concept and a great way of showing it.

Mutation responds:

If you can afford the entire Swift 3D package, go for it! It comes with great documentation, so the learning curve isn't a cliff.

You are right on the spot by saying it feels incomplete, because I feel the same. It was a bit rushed at the end, mainly because I had been tweaking and tormenting for 3 days and wanted it to be over with, but reviews like yours and the experience gained can only lead to better things, so thank you =D

[Cackletta's Revenge part2]

Work on it...

Nice use of sprites, but it's really too short and not all that interesting. Perhaps if you extended it and used more complex animation techniques, it would work.

For the time being, though. It's not all that good. Sorry. Still, keep on trying! One of the things I think you did very well was adding a certain amount of user interactivity. The outtakes were a good idea.

Work on your presentation a bit more. Remember that in the actual game, there were many movie clips of characters as they talked. For instance, you could probably make Bowser splash about angrilly in the bathtub when he's yelling at Luigi rather than just turning around. I'm sure there was an "angry" sprite in that game for Bowser.

Just little things like that.

MarioandLuigiman responds:

Very discritptive, constuctive, and told me what to fix. Thanks alot.

[Bunnycat 2]

It has ninjas, so it's automatically good.

And it's bloody hilarious too. I love the timing of the movements, altogether they create a very funny piece. The sound effects and voices were very well done. I especially love that foghorn sound when it shows the dirty ice cream. I loved the part where the Ninja tried to eat the ice cream through his mask and then did the ninja drop trick to escape, brilliant!

The tweening in general was great, but there were some bits you could have watched out for, especially the way the bunnycat's eyes seemed to be trying to escape all the time. If this was intentional, then it still looks a little strange when those pupils start to move in opposite directions.

The graphics were very good too. I love the no-lines look. Very clean and appealing to look at.

I like it a lot! Good work!

Wonchop responds:

I've always found directing pupil direction to be tough. For example when someone looks to his left, then looks down, the left eye moves from the left side to the bottom right, yet the right eye moves from the left side to the bottom left. It's all a bit confusing.